I completed 10 volumes of the Light Novel and the Web Novel. The story from Light Novel after volume 10 will not be included in this review.
Story 7/10: The opening is basic everyone can see the plot is similar to the average Isekai series but the MC is not reincarnated person. After receiving a blue jade that preserved his ancestors memories and history the journey of him began. Mysteries and twists will gradually be revealed
Main 8/10: MCs loss of life experience comes first. Dont worry his development is sound and obvious and the problems will be rationally explained later. For my part I really enjoy the scene where he levels up and starts acting strangely since he cant control himself. That makes me chuckle.
Characters 7/10: Because this work is focused on the harem genre there are many female characters. Some of themlike Novem Miranda Shanon... will be exceptionally well written including the characters thoughts personalities and their action. However the characters development is really uneven. Some characters are very prominent and the rest are barely mentioned and deeply written. This is unfair and wasteful the author creates many characters but only some of them make impressive in this series
Pacing 6/10: It seem a bit slow which makes most readers feel bored and paused/dropped. Be patient If you passed in 4 or 5 volumes the effort will be rewarded. Have patient If you passed in 4 or 5 volumes the effort will be rewarded. Thinking the first was just a trailer to introduce the setting and the frame for the next plot
Power system 2/10: That is the biggest weakness of series. Skills are very basic and simple similar to other fictions with settings in medieval times. Lyles skill Connection is related with a situation I like
which is why I give him one point more.
World Building 7/10: Its Ok. The author illustrates the challenges of national leadership the intricacies of politics diplomacy economy guilds and other issues even though he does not describe too much in detail about a nations history or lore. In order to make the stories more easier to read he also included some amusing parts.
Bonus:
Comedy 10/10: Without a doubt the series excelled in this genre. The issues written are both fun and deeply satirical about polygamy make some people stop having the illusionor notthat having a harem is good. That is a big problem
Conclusion
This fiction is so good maybe the best of Yomu Mishima. It helps reader have a new view on the story of a MC with his harem. Moreover the idea for the sequel for this work also very creative and extremely expected. Unfortunately the author probably no longer continues writing this series as well as the LN version has also stopped at vol 10 in recent years
70
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